Example statement
Here is an example statement for a Relocation Scholarship that may help you structure your personal statement.
Name and Student ID
Dear Selection Committee
Introduction:
Growing up in [specific context, e.g., a small regional town in rural Australia], I’ve witnessed firsthand the challenges of limited access to educational opportunities. This experience has driven my passion for [your field of study, e.g., healthcare], where I aspire to create positive change for communities like my own.
Academic Achievements:
As a school leaver, I am proud to have [specific achievements, e.g., achieved a high ATAR of X, excelled in advanced mathematics and science courses, or received awards such as the Dux of my school]. Additionally, I contributed to my community by [extracurricular achievement, e.g., organizing a peer mentoring program or volunteering with local initiatives].
Career Aspirations:
I plan to pursue a career in [specific field, e.g., nursing or engineering] to address key challenges in regional and disadvantaged communities. My goal is to [specific aspiration, e.g., improve healthcare accessibility in remote areas or develop sustainable infrastructure for underserved populations].
Impact of the Scholarship:
Relocating from [regional or remote location] to [university city or campus] presents significant financial challenges. This scholarship would alleviate the financial burden of [specific costs, e.g., relocating to attend university, accommodation, or educational resources]. It would also enable me to participate in opportunities like [specific activity, e.g., an overseas exchange program, student leadership initiatives, or industry placements], broadening my perspective and enhancing my skills to contribute meaningfully to my field.
Conclusion:
With this support, I am determined to overcome barriers, excel academically, and give back to communities like mine. Thank you for considering my application and investing in students who aim to create a brighter future for all Australians.
The University of Newcastle acknowledges the traditional custodians of the lands within our footprint areas: Awabakal, Darkinjung, Biripai, Worimi, Wonnarua, and Eora Nations. We also pay respect to the wisdom of our Elders past and present.